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The rain glittered on their chilled skin
As it sparkled like a fine diamond dust
A white hot raging fire blazed in their eyes
An undeniable and unspoken exchange of lust

They were but strangers to one another
A mere chance passing on a crowed street
He was drawn to her presence quickly
The scent of her was strong and sweet

She could not avoid his direct gaze
When he pinned her down with a glance
He wanted to reach out to touch her
Yet he could not make his body advance

The skies responded with a deafening roar
As the lightening split open the clouds
He started toward her with determination
But she had melted into the lively crowd
©2009 *Fallen78
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:icondarkgirlx003:
This is very good! :clap:

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"One pill makes you larger
And one pill makes you small
And the ones that mother gives you
Don't do anything at all
Go ask Alice
When she's ten feet tall...

...Remember what the dormouse said;
'FEED YOUR HEAD
FEED YOUR HEAD!'"
:iconfallen78:
thank you!! :rose:

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Beagan agus a ra go maith. --Say little, but say it well.

My horns are holding up my halo.
:icondarkgirlx003:
You're Welcome!

--
"One pill makes you larger
And one pill makes you small
And the ones that mother gives you
Don't do anything at all
Go ask Alice
When she's ten feet tall...

...Remember what the dormouse said;
'FEED YOUR HEAD
FEED YOUR HEAD!'"
:iconjanejayne:
The skies responded with a deafening roar

love that...

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It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it.
Aristotle
:iconcreativemikey:
The scent of her was strong and sweet
Especially :love:that:heart:

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:iconfallen78:
thank you! this one, as simple as it was actually took me awhile to write. lol. :heart:

--
Beagan agus a ra go maith. --Say little, but say it well.

My horns are holding up my halo.
:iconfallen78:
thank you!! :iconurhappyplz:

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Beagan agus a ra go maith. --Say little, but say it well.

My horns are holding up my halo.
:iconcreativemikey:
I believe you:heart:

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:iconwhydoidothiseveryday:
i love the opening, the words you use are really good and it's quite beautiful

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You can't always get what you want.

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